EpikHellSword's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gen z wankers choosing their gender be like]

Very fluid animation. The design is pleasing and unique enough to look at. And the lines are delivered well. That being said it doesn't blow me away.

Bluflamestudios responds:

Got it. Thanks chief

[sonic vs goku sprite animation. by:max]

The tone is clear. The Sans cameo was cool. The end was confusing though-I mean we can only assume whether or not Goku was defeated by Sonic-at least in the blooper. It's definitely a classic style you are going for but nothing extraordinary.

itstime2reanimate responds:

Okay

[sonic and sandbag]

It's very fluid. Since this is your first animation I'll give an extra half star. I would add some sound effects though. And in the very beginning we can see a box for Sonic. This adds an extra second of processing the animation so you may just want to start it off immediately with the close up instead.

I would also recommend starting off with the camera panned out or at least have both sprites in view so we already know what Sonic is running to-although that's just a preference.

itstime2reanimate responds:

thanks, I guess.

[Welcome to the Void presents: Anomalies]

That's an interesting style you are going for. I like the static in the background-it really helps with the tone. A little bit of a nitpick (won't affect my score) at 3:01 when Patton ends her sentence she misses the word "has" making it so that anyone reading the subtitles whilst listening may be confused for a second thinking that it's a bit too fast. I know I was.

In her next sentence at 3:02 it sounds like she says "As much as" instead of "doesn't matter".

3:08 the delivery is too fast so I definitely couldn't understand what she said. You should try to have her enunciate more so it's understandable and we can have a better gauge of the emotion in her voice. It sounds like she is speeding through the script.

I'll give a 4 for the interesting style and fluid animation. However work on that delivery when voice acting. It's too fast at some parts and needs to convey better emotion to the audience.

Lizzum55 responds:

Thanks for the feed back man! I’ll be sure to take you’re criticisms into account when making the next vid! Admittedly voice acting isn’t really my strong suit but I’m trying to get better at it

[Goku Super Saiyan 3]

Looks like a good start with high quality animation. I would just say the environment is missing. And the arm anatomy-most notably where Goku hits Buu with a left hook looks awkward.

Takogui responds:

thanks! I'm still studying this anatomy stuff, so don't expect too much

[Winter Contingency (Halo Reach Animatic)]

Pretty cool animatic. You got the tone down nicely and the story was clear. Is this original audio or from the game though?

Cave-Art responds:

Yep the audio is from the cutscene its based on

[Robo finds a single shpenny]

Fluid animation and very charming character. There is a lot of detail in this.

However I did not understand what the main character said at 3 seconds "Oh what's this ???thingy." You should still enunciate your delivery even if fast. The audience needs to understand what you are saying. Especially if this is a comedy since the joke needs to hit.

EDIT: Okay yeah now that you typed it out I can hear them say it but you conjoined the syllables. I used to do the same thing when I tried to talk faster. Your tongue is moving too fast in between syllables that it doesn't fully position itself where it needs to be to enunciate. You also could put more breath into your voice to add some bass.

The pause at 25 seconds should have something like maybe the cashier using his eyes to look at the main character and his "shpenny" for comedic purposes. I notice the main character does change their expression but the cashier should too in order to indicate he is connecting with the MC.

Oberorka responds:

Thank you! And noted, thanks for the criticism lol.
And she says "pentagonal little thingy".

[My Game Coming In 2024! (My Indie Studio)]

Very fluid animation and reminds me of Pixar. You may want something to take up the space of the background though. The background being so white and empty doesn't complement the over the top animation you are using for the introduction.

MiloSalinas responds:

Thank You For Much!

[animation final for class lmao]

Clearly you spent a lot of time on details in this animation as it is beautiful.

The only critique I have is that after the confused face at 1 second it should stay a bit longer or have a clean transition into a shocked face. It seems he just goes into the scream without us seeing him shocked or change his expression at the sight before he screams.

That being said this was pretty solid.

noodlenood responds:

thanks for the feedback! yeah I still need to improve on my timing and spacing for sure, can't wait to work on more small animations!

[Super Sonic VS Giganto 2D animation]

Extremely fluid and detailed animation right off the bat. Complementary music. And overall REALLY high quality especially for your first animation.

CelestialFish responds:

Thank you so much, I believe ive made a great job on this, considering its well my first ever finilized animation