The script is classic Tankman. The beginning is choppy with Tankman landing. Is that just the style of animation? It doesn't affect my score since I'm not sure.
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The script is classic Tankman. The beginning is choppy with Tankman landing. Is that just the style of animation? It doesn't affect my score since I'm not sure.
yeah i just tried to match straight up what utah did in the original series. so it does look a little choppy yeah
Fluid animation. Although the cutoff should have been where you transitioned into dark screen. It was awkward to have the music just abruptly stop and have the stick figure still lay there.
Awesome work as always. I loved some the clean transitions and seeing them actually switch positions such as 1:00 where Karlach puts her leg on Shadowheart.
And the way you used the camera was great. I love the endoscope pov. And especially when Karlach's body shook at the end. That was hot.
At 17 seconds the cut was weird. I could still see the previous frame for a split second. It took me out of the immersion for a bit. Also at 0:43 the blur hurts my eyes. A simple fade in/fade out would be much more beneficial as it would give the audience enough time to adapt to the next scene.
At 0:44 Karlach's line is difficult to understand. Even if she is whispering or muttering to herself it should still be understandable to the audience.
In fact I think you could have had WolfheadAtNight deliver her lines a bit louder in general.
The cum looks more like whipped cream than cum. Although I guess that's the style you were going for.
Overall this is very solid as always. I would just say some fine tunes on line deliveries as well as a different transition style are all that is needed. Awesome job!
I agree.
The artstyle is fascinating and really shows how much your games have grown. The animation is very fluid and really adds into the "anime style" you usually go for. Very promising stuff.
However the basics are very glitchy such as opening the menu when pressing pause and certain actions. Still a promising start though and a great growth. I would be willing to give more stars if the game didn't glitch out everytime I open a menu. You're a talented creator so I'm sure you'll fine tune it well.
Awesome. Very creative design and gameplay. The music really helps keep me patient as I figure out the puzzles.
It's a great game as always. However there are some crashes here and there. It constantly crashed with the strapon scene with Jewel and Rida.
Once the game finishes. Since I do have the money. If all the glitches and bugs are fixed (or at least a majority). I might actually buy it.
I have been looking so long for this song! It's so relaxing. Your vocals really complement the relaxing instruments and overall tone of the song. Speaking of the tone I love the piano and drum riffs. They really flow with your voice.
The lyrics really reflect the story summarizing the trilogy and the story that has been told so far whilst foreshadowing the end of the game. This song also has a lot of replay value. It is something I can see a majority of people enjoying. The fade out with the piano at the end of the song is perfect as it allows for an easy loop if needed.
The only issue I have is the "alice is dead" ad lib is a bit too low on volume. It should have been whispered a little louder so we can hear it.
Very iconic!
Very upbeat with smooth transitions. I especially like the victory tune nod at the end however I felt that the transition was abrupt instead of smooth. Maybe increasing the volume a bit for the battle victory theme would make it feel more complementary to the track.
Unique and iconic.
It's a bit small don't you think? A background would also be helpful.
well i didnt know what kind of background to do and didnt feel like resizing lol
I just clicked because I thought it was aesthetically pleasing. This looks awesome! I love the contrasting shadings. The facial hair is fascinating. My favorite character in the series is Annie.
I have... lots of favorites. Annie is 100% a contender, I think my absolute favorite is Grisha or Shadis.
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