EpikHellSword's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super Sonic VS Giganto 2D animation]

Extremely fluid and detailed animation right off the bat. Complementary music. And overall REALLY high quality especially for your first animation.

CelestialFish responds:

Thank you so much, I believe ive made a great job on this, considering its well my first ever finilized animation

[2023 Holiday Special]

It does it's job. Nothing too spectacular but is definitely watchable. I like the fluidity of the animation. I would suggest some sound effects or maybe even a background design. Something as simple as one straight line to identify where the floor is would do wonders for the animation and add to the world.

Since this is referring to newgrounds even just adding the logo or some fan art of some well known characters, newgrounds environments like madness or the uberkids, alloy, P-bot, etc. would add that much more to the magic of the animation.

Partyhat10 responds:

Thanks for the feedback

[The Time I almost Died (story)]

The animation is fine and the timing of the sound effects and jokes are well done.

The only critique I have is that your delivery could have more energy to it. I mean since you are telling a story you may as well put some emotion into it since it seems like you are just saying words with no tone. It's a story! Exaggerate! I know you used sound effects to convey you freaking out but you could have set it up first.

EDIT: As I said the animation is fine. I'm talking about your script/delivery of the lines.

MarcusAnimations responds:

Thank you for the feedback

just to let you know the reason why i'm not that good is because I'm only 2 months through with animating

[The Ball]

The animation certainly is fluid. The transitions are seemless and the way the ball changes ways it travels is pretty creative.

OwenF-99 responds:

Thank you brother This is just one last test I took because I have an idea to make an animation called Quartz Girl and Diamond Boy.

[Drunk]

It works. The character design really stands out. Other than chaos I don't really see much happening though. What are the people doing in the silhouette?

CloGui responds:

They are having a nice picnic in the middle of the road :^)

[Ariel's Serene Scene]

This is some beautiful animation. I like how Ariel's hair flows. And the music really complements the tone. The transition in the lighting was very smooth I didn't even notice it.

That being said the sea's movements look awkward. The sea and the clouds really juxtapose one another. However both of them and and the lines of the sea also eventually took my attention away from Ariel and Flounder because it shone so bright.

But great work regardless!

makallenz responds:

That's an interesting point but I have to admit I was inspired by LOZ the Wind Wakers ocean look so perhaps I got carried away and didn't balance the actual focal point which should be Ariel. It's something to think about for future pieces. Thanks for taking the time to let me know!

[See forugh facee]

Even though this is a shitpost it's clear you put a lot of effort implementing a few animation styles into it judging by the simple and juxtaposing complex designs. The animation is actually pretty fluid as well. There clearly is some kind of weird story going on where the guy sleeping is possessed or some shit

That being said adding some sound effects or music would greatly add to comedic effect or whatever story you are trying to tell. Especially if you cannot think of dialogue.

TizerPerson responds:

Oml my first comment tysmmmmm, I try do audio but it dint come through

[Pumpkins my beloved]

This is simple animation. I enjoy how fluid the movement is and the sparkle in her eyes to reflect her care for the pumpkin. I'll add half a star for the addition of the sparkle.

BloodMoonCrow responds:

aw shucks, thank you! yes yes, its just a simple thing for practice!