EpikHellSword's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Violet Smoke (Deference For Darkness)]

This is REALLY fluid animation. Very detailed with complementary music. The only reason I took away half a star is because the smoke looks unrealistic. Now if that was intentional and symbolizes something like a white flag for surrendering to the darkness I'd be happy to change my rating to 5 stars.

[Robo finds a single shpenny]

Fluid animation and very charming character. There is a lot of detail in this.

However I did not understand what the main character said at 3 seconds "Oh what's this ???thingy." You should still enunciate your delivery even if fast. The audience needs to understand what you are saying. Especially if this is a comedy since the joke needs to hit.

EDIT: Okay yeah now that you typed it out I can hear them say it but you conjoined the syllables. I used to do the same thing when I tried to talk faster. Your tongue is moving too fast in between syllables that it doesn't fully position itself where it needs to be to enunciate. You also could put more breath into your voice to add some bass.

The pause at 25 seconds should have something like maybe the cashier using his eyes to look at the main character and his "shpenny" for comedic purposes. I notice the main character does change their expression but the cashier should too in order to indicate he is connecting with the MC.

Oberorka responds:

Thank you! And noted, thanks for the criticism lol.
And she says "pentagonal little thingy".

[My Game Coming In 2024! (My Indie Studio)]

Very fluid animation and reminds me of Pixar. You may want something to take up the space of the background though. The background being so white and empty doesn't complement the over the top animation you are using for the introduction.

MiloSalinas responds:

Thank You For Much!

[All our food keeps blowing up]

Not really my cup of tea but I can appreciate the attempt. The only critique I have is at the end the explosion sound effect was missing.

[animation final for class lmao]

Clearly you spent a lot of time on details in this animation as it is beautiful.

The only critique I have is that after the confused face at 1 second it should stay a bit longer or have a clean transition into a shocked face. It seems he just goes into the scream without us seeing him shocked or change his expression at the sight before he screams.

That being said this was pretty solid.

noodlenood responds:

thanks for the feedback! yeah I still need to improve on my timing and spacing for sure, can't wait to work on more small animations!

[Super Sonic VS Giganto 2D animation]

Extremely fluid and detailed animation right off the bat. Complementary music. And overall REALLY high quality especially for your first animation.

CelestialFish responds:

Thank you so much, I believe ive made a great job on this, considering its well my first ever finilized animation

[2023 Holiday Special]

It does it's job. Nothing too spectacular but is definitely watchable. I like the fluidity of the animation. I would suggest some sound effects or maybe even a background design. Something as simple as one straight line to identify where the floor is would do wonders for the animation and add to the world.

Since this is referring to newgrounds even just adding the logo or some fan art of some well known characters, newgrounds environments like madness or the uberkids, alloy, P-bot, etc. would add that much more to the magic of the animation.

Partyhat10 responds:

Thanks for the feedback

[LEONARDO DICAPRIO JEALOUS WITH JUSTIN BIEBER - SHORT ANIMATED PARODY (JAnimationsRD)]

Short, sweet and to the point. The added sound effects are endearing.

[mickey on a railway]

The song is catchy and the visuals do convey that message.

[Do NOT say this on the first date]

This was pretty fluid animation. Short, sweet, and the the point.
The only (kind of) complaint I have is was the ear rape needed at the end?