Not really my cup of tea but I can appreciate the attempt. The only critique I have is at the end the explosion sound effect was missing.
Not really my cup of tea but I can appreciate the attempt. The only critique I have is at the end the explosion sound effect was missing.
Clearly you spent a lot of time on details in this animation as it is beautiful.
The only critique I have is that after the confused face at 1 second it should stay a bit longer or have a clean transition into a shocked face. It seems he just goes into the scream without us seeing him shocked or change his expression at the sight before he screams.
That being said this was pretty solid.
thanks for the feedback! yeah I still need to improve on my timing and spacing for sure, can't wait to work on more small animations!
Extremely fluid and detailed animation right off the bat. Complementary music. And overall REALLY high quality especially for your first animation.
Thank you so much, I believe ive made a great job on this, considering its well my first ever finilized animation
It does it's job. Nothing too spectacular but is definitely watchable. I like the fluidity of the animation. I would suggest some sound effects or maybe even a background design. Something as simple as one straight line to identify where the floor is would do wonders for the animation and add to the world.
Since this is referring to newgrounds even just adding the logo or some fan art of some well known characters, newgrounds environments like madness or the uberkids, alloy, P-bot, etc. would add that much more to the magic of the animation.
Thanks for the feedback
Short, sweet and to the point. The added sound effects are endearing.
The song is catchy and the visuals do convey that message.
This was pretty fluid animation. Short, sweet, and the the point.
The only (kind of) complaint I have is was the ear rape needed at the end?
Very fluid animation and awesome voice acting. The only critique I have is that I didn't understand what you said as the punchline at the end. You may want to enunciate it better. Was that a bleep? It sounds like he was about to say penis...does he get penis?
OH no no! i didnt voice act it, it was from a holiday parody twitter video but i cant seem to find the original creator. (btw at the end he says "i gift people"
The animation certainly was fluid I can appreciate what you were going for but it's nothing spectacular nor funny.
I'm confused on what the story is and the animation title doesn't show. I assume it is supposed to say ice cream man? That being said I guess the animation is fine. I guess I just don't get it because I've never hated, loved, nor really followed any of his works.
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Joined on 6/22/15