Fluid animation, on point tone, very clean transitions, and overall an awesome job.
Fluid animation, on point tone, very clean transitions, and overall an awesome job.
Fluid animation, classic characters that are easily memorable, awesome designs, slapstick animation style with all the emphasis when the body parts move, clean transitions, stupendous sound effects, and an all around fantastic job!
Fine designs, but the animation is choppy and the disappearing bodies don't make sense. You should make the animation more fluid, add some sound effects, physics, and make the transitions smoother.
Classic character and background design, awesome facial expression, fluid animation and an impressive job in only 4 days.
Gee, thanks man, comments like this make me want to post more movies on this site
The designs are classic, the voice acting is great, the facial expressions were accurate, the physics were fantastic, the shadows and lighting were astounding, and the blur is fine, and I assume you used a classic soundtrack. However, the camera angles are sometimes too close such as the first couple seconds of the clip and the lip sync could use some fine tuning. Other than that, excellent job!
Thanks I'll try to see what I do for the final version to improve the points you mentioned
Smooth animation, awesome designs, fine voice acting, okay narration, satisfying sound effects, great angles, and perfect pun. Excellent work!
Catchy guitar pattern, complementary percussions, soothing strings, and accurate lyrics. The camera angles are fantastic, the character design is brilliant, the background colors really set the tone, the facial expression is on point, and the lighting and shadows are awesome! And the cut off at the end was an integral part of the tone leading to more of the dull feeling. Magnificent work!
Wow! Thank you so much dude, I’m kinda shocked by your comment. Thank you for taking the time to leave such a thoughtful and specific message. I really appreciate it.
Excellent character design, clear storytelling, and fluid transitions. The technique of page flipping drawings to make it look like an animation is so cool!
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