Well, the voice acting is great as always, the tone is on point, good sound effects used. You also had some pretty seductive tones in there. Slurping was definitely an interesting choice. 1:11 seems like you should've taken a beat or shushed him, the delivery just seemed too abrupt. 3:46 "Screw" kinda died out when you pronounced the "ew". But this was pretty well done.
EDIT: I'm not saying it sounded like ew, I'm saying the pronunciation died out after the scr and sounded like "th"